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	<description>practices &#38; theories, fall 2011 edition</description>
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		<title>Comment on module guide by paularoush</title>
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		<dc:creator>paularoush</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:58:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hi hannah, you were absent all the times i tried to give it back to you
the feedback is written on the proposal so you need to collect it from my office. the same thing with the feedback for your digital files
the two main issues you need to address in your paper are
1- the focus of your essay topic- you refer al lot to the amateur photobook? is this your angle? if so, make it the focus of your research paper
2-the referencing and acknowledging of your sources

best regards, paula</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hi hannah, you were absent all the times i tried to give it back to you<br />
the feedback is written on the proposal so you need to collect it from my office. the same thing with the feedback for your digital files<br />
the two main issues you need to address in your paper are<br />
1- the focus of your essay topic- you refer al lot to the amateur photobook? is this your angle? if so, make it the focus of your research paper<br />
2-the referencing and acknowledging of your sources</p>
<p>best regards, paula</p>
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		<title>Comment on module guide by Hannah Owens</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hannah Owens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Dec 2011 12:08:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good Afternoon Paula.

I didnt seem to get my essay back with feedback, i wondered if it was possible to maybe email me them back? Also i remember you mentioned an issue with my e.pub version and wanted to make sure i could still hand it in as i presented it to you in previous weeks.
Thank you for your time, help.

Hannnah Owens</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good Afternoon Paula.</p>
<p>I didnt seem to get my essay back with feedback, i wondered if it was possible to maybe email me them back? Also i remember you mentioned an issue with my e.pub version and wanted to make sure i could still hand it in as i presented it to you in previous weeks.<br />
Thank you for your time, help.</p>
<p>Hannnah Owens</p>
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